Longer Road Needed to Go Hollywood

3. Prioritize the information. Place copy flush left on either side of the page (something many magazines do) in easy-to-read, bold black type. A category list in the middle of the page that’s in centered, reversed type is very hard to read.

4. Simplify the shot and go for drama! The overall shot is typical of trying to do too much and winds up just being so-so. The environment is contrived and the room is over-propped.